Now that i have seen the photos.
The only little thing i can see that can be improve..is just the light..but a picture is worth a thousand words so.
Maybe a bit too many of projectors / light sometimes, personnally i think the "flat" of black is more beautiful without a big light in the middle.(like the 2nd original)
Its really a detail but i had to find it because the perfection dont exist :3
Maybe other thing i would say for Sway :
You may try to find (i don't say it's easy) other "positions", or maybe other angle of view (for norman), because its always more or less the sames positions, some pictures are very similar.
But when i saw the pic 21..i have understood that you already working on this :d
Finally
I repeat that all of this is only my opinion and all opinion from other on what i said is welcome
ps : the video is just amazing, fantastic work, over 9000 / 10
Karl